Away

where you once have been
dust does not mark
now that you are away

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…in response to Mara Eastern’s Poetry 101 Rehab: Away

Some people leave a mark on you heart and a place in your soul and this is in memory of them

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12 responses to “Away

  1. I took this a different way as a reflection of one’s individual “past” and to let go of the past because you can’t change it, “dust does not mark.” When I read your dedication, I realized that there was another point of view. Interesting how we can read into pieces with a different perspective. Loved it!

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    • Thanks Olga…yes I do so love the different perspectives that can been seen within a piece of poetry…and I guess that perspective is coloured by our experiences. Thanks once again for reading and taking the time to comment

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  2. For so few words it speaks volumes.

    Dust will never settle where the memories stay strong.

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